Thursday, October 4, 2012

Is the intro to my novel any good? Please help!?


Question


Is the intro to my novel any good? Please help!?
So Im sorry that I keep posting this, but Ive taken some advice and changed a few things in my intro. I was wondering if the changes make it better?


Answer


I liked it a lot. It reminds me of my own style and I like vampire novels Ive written one myself. Good luck!



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